UGH WRITING TEACHER
I like that he's critical, I really do (usually at least), but I'm sensing what may be a DOUBLE STANDARD in the works here.
On first paper, his major criticisms:
"You lack organization and focus! You deviate too much! STAY ON TOPIC THIS ENTIRE PARAGRAPH IS IRREVALANT RAAAHAKHKSHNM I give you a B!"
me: ;A;
So on second paper (which is a WIP right now-- half my paper so far consists of notes for my team in pokemon pearl (gardevoir or misdreavus? hmmm)), his thoughts on my topic (which is debating the legality of bittorrent when
the RIAA US copyright laws are taken into account) (PS the answer is yes of course but shh I have to appear fair and balanced in the paper and not act like
the RIAA certain companies are whiny pussies out to ruin everyone's fun)
ANYWAY so the comments he gave for my arguments were, "HOW DOES NAPSTER PLAY INTO THIS" (who gives a fuck about napster anymore that is so 1999 and ps you're the one who said "peer-2-peer programs is too vague a topic, you need to narrow it down" which is why I SPECIFICALLY MADE MY PAPER ABOUT BITTORRENT) and he goes on to say, (this is a direct quote) "Finally, one argument may be that right now is just not the right time because there are bigger fish to fry."
bitch if I tried either of those, you would immediately slap me down and dock me 40 points for NOT FOCUSING ENOUGH
not only that, but the latter's "argument" could be used in ANYONE'S PAPER yet I didn't see him mentioning that to the chick who is writing on whether or not fluoride should be added to our drinking water or the salmon regulation woman.
\o/ god writing teachers, why can't they be consistently anal like a normal person
for those curious, here are my notes for gardevoir vs. misdreavus in my paper:
gardevoir:
pros:
- overall great stats, especially specials
- psychic, which owns a lot of shit
- not bad looking
- the pokedex description for it is cute
cons:
- everyone loves gardevoir
- I mean really loves gardevoir; I'm sick of the fucking porno out there (thank you, 4chan)
- misdreavus looks cooler
misdreavus:
pros:
- overall good stats
- purple, which is <3
- ghost, which is probably useful. no normal attacks work on it.
- but even if it isn't, it can learn psychic anyway so who cares
cons:
- ghost, which probably sucks more than is useful
- gardevoir has better stats
Thoughts? Should I take Gardevoir even though every time I look at it I will remember 4chan fanboys fapping away at Kirlia? Or Misdreavus, which looks cool but kinda sucks in comparison?
my life is so banal